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Panic every step you take
Tossing and turning, hoping to wake
Dreaming of chaos, dreaming of vengence
Dreaming of stars shining like beautiful pendents
Hoping the darkness will be ended by the sun
Waiting for the clock to strike past one
Then past 2,3,4, then 5
Hoping that in your dreams you stay alive
For once the sun rises in its beautiful shades
The nightmare shall end, a new day will be made
Then you try and forget the restless night you found
And you hope that next night, your sleep will be sound
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Here's another poem about nightmares and how it feels to be in one. I have nightmares often, and I hate being in them. I always try to wake myself up, but yea..XD Anyways, that's it.

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:iconyamiyugi:
Awesome poem! :+fav: :D

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:tears:beautiful!!!

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awesome goodjob

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Very pretty poem ^^ I can't write poetry one bit...
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I really like this. I like the flow and you've got the feeling of someone who desperately wants the night to end shining through there.
But one little thing (dont hate me) -
'Dreaming of stars shining like beautiful pendents'
Really nice line, it carries the rhythm well, but, isnt that a description of a nice dream? its the single line of light in a piece of darkness and it doesnt quite fit concept-wise.
Lovely piece overall though.

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:iconannechan:
o my thats so beautiful!
its give me insperation !
good work tsuki !

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August 31, 2003
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